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The Queen
(Ciel Phantomhive x Reader)

You stared at the pieces on the board with a serious expression.  Ciel had been pondering his next move for the past twenty minutes.  You were beginning to grow bored.  The tea had gotten cold and there were no more pecan divinities on the tray.  You sighed.
“_____, I have a question for you,” the earl spoke suddenly.
You glanced at him.  His sapphire eye was watching you carefully and the corners of his mouth were turned upwards slightly with amusement.  He rested his head against the back of his hand lazily.
“Yes?  What is it?”  You asked.
Ciel picked up the king.  He turned it over in his hand then pointed towards the board.  “If I were the king, who would you say the other pieces are?”
You blinked a few times.  That was an odd and rather random question.  You pondered his question for a moment.
“Hmm…I’d say that the knight would have to be Sebastian…and the queen, I’d say, would be Lady Elizabeth, yes?”
“Wrong,” Ciel answered flatly.  He frowned a bit, as if your answer had displeased him.  Then he sighed and stood.  You copied his motion, unsure of exactly how you had upset him.
“I beg your pardon,” you said quietly.  “I didn’t mean to…”
“I have paperwork to attend to.  Consider my question and give me a different answer tomorrow,” he interrupted.  You let your shoulders slump in defeat, but smiled.  That was so like the young Phantomhive.  He was politely kicking you out of his manor for the evening.
“Yes, Milord,” you sighed.
             It was raining as you left the manor.  ‘It’s always so rainy here in London…’ you thought.  You had moved there a few years ago to stay with your father when your mother passed away.  When you heard of the tragedy that had befallen the young earl, you started visiting him regularly.  Once he found out you played chess, and played it well, he hardly ever let you leave before supper time.  But, considering the fact that your father worked almost all day, and you had nothing better to do, it didn’t really bother you.  You really looked forwards to your visits, actually…You liked seeing Ciel.    Even though you knew he was already engaged, you couldn’t help but form a bit of a crush on him.  And that was putting it mildly.  You thought about him almost constantly.  “What am I doing?”  You chastised yourself.  You blushed slightly.  “He isn’t interested, _____!  Stop thinking such silly thoughts!”  

        The next day you visited the earl and gave him a slightly different answer, with Elizabeth still being the queen.  Ciel seemed to grow a bit impatient with you and ordered you to leave earlier than usual.  You were confused, but you complied without any complaint.  “Come again tomorrow,” he said.  “And come as soon as possible.”
    ‘Does he even remember it’s my birthday tomorrow?’ you wondered as you walked home.  Thunder roared in the distance.  You sighed.
       
        You dressed a bit fancier than usual since it was your birthday.  Your hair was tied back with a lovely ribbon that your father had given you and the dress that you wore was new.  As you entered Ciel’s study, you saw that the chess board was set up like usual.  However, under closer observation you noticed that one of the pieces was missing.  Ciel approached you.
“Good evening, ____,” he greeted you.  He handed you a small box.  “And happy birthday.”
You smiled brightly and took the present.  A blush presented itself on your face.  “You didn’t have to…”
“Open it,” Ciel demanded.
You nodded once and opened the lid to the box.  Your eyes widened.  Inside was the queen.  You took it out and passed it between your hands slowly.
“This is…”
“The answer to my question,” Ciel said.  “Will you be my queen?”
You blinked a few times.  “What about Lady Elizabeth?”
“I’ve already called off my engagement,” Ciel extended his hand to you expectantly.  You took it. “So what do you say?”
You were blushing furiously.  You nodded.  “Yes.  I’d love to be your queen.”
Ciel grinned.  “Good…after all, I’ve already planned the wedding…” He added the last part quietly.
You laughed and threw your arms around him.
“I love you, Ciel,” you said cheerfully.
“I love you too, _____.”

THE END
Okay...so I wrote this a couple of months ago and was a little iffy about putting it up, but my reader inserts have been pretty popular so far and I was like "What they heck!". I love Ciel n_n! He's just sooo cute. No funny ending like usual, but I hope you all enjoy it anyways. I look forwards to reading your comments and I hope you enjoy :D!

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CruisaderCelestia Featured By Owner May 3, 2017  Student Writer
*choking* I THINK LIZZIE WAS BEHIND THIS. CIEL WOULD NOT HAVE PLANNED THE WEDDING THAT EASILY XD
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AuraLady Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
wai..wha? You already planned the wedding???? I sure as hell hope you gave me enough time to get wooed before... or were you going to just throw me in a wedding dress on the day you have picked?!
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Animepotato123 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2017
Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Ciel Smile!! 
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midnightbloodlust38 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2016
Aww....... but it would be funny/sad if the reader said no...... what would he do than... since he already planned the wedding....
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GothicLolita527 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017
Make a extended ending of this
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TheNerdyGamer21 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Student Artist
😀soo beautiful
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :).
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iOnlyKnifu Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Aw! This was so cute, And I hope one day I'll be able to make stuff like this...
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :). And I'm sure your stories are wonderful!
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PinkLion7 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2016
A bit fast for my liking, but otherwise, I loved it. Especially the ending. The whole thing was just so cute. :)
                                                                                                                                                               
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! This was one of my first fics. The later ones were a bit longer :).
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victoriouslysporadic Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ohmygod that's one of the best things I've ever read
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :).
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RosieforevzAJ Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oddly I started clapping and laughing when Ciel said he called off the engagement with Lizzy XD

Awesome story! ^w^
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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EmoAnimeDemon Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2016  Student Writer
I was like
HA LIZZY HES MINE ^-^
I shouted this at 3 in the morning lol
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RosieforevzAJ Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
XD
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EmoAnimeDemon Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2016  Student Writer
:iconmnrthumbsupplz: 
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american-otaku-girl Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2016
That was me, too XD
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Madcastle007 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Hobbyist Interface Designer
It is really good I don't think it needs a part 2
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
This is cute ^^ wait... How old is ciel again?
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! He's 13, I believe.
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I know now I was new when I posted that I'm in season 2 now!
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Wyldstylez Featured By Owner Edited May 7, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
He's 12, but turns 13 later.
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FNAFwriterandartist Featured By Owner May 7, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh lol
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Orphically Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Student Writer
This is cute; I would suggest editing the format a bit to make it more appealing, but it's great otherwise :)!
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letsfaceitthisway Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016
Lol, does anyone feel like they're cheating on their anime character in a different one? Because I totally am
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sweethetalialover Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
* raises hand* me.....😥
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iOnlyKnifu Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Meep.... Llama Emoji-07 (Hopeless or Scared) [V1] Crying Mako 
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crazyshadamylover Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2015  Student Writer
Odd question yet so right for Ciel Phantomhive. So cute!!!!
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sonjaanimelover Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Soooo cute
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)!
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ImZeFemPrussia Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2015  Student Writer
What if I said no? XD
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Alternate ending:

Ciel watched you for a moment, gauging your expression.  Finally, he allowed a small sigh to escape his lips.  "Take some time.  Think about it."
You opened your mouth to speak, but he merely waved you off.  You gave an apologetic nod before leaving the earl to his thoughts.
"Young master?"  Sebastian seemed to appear from nowhere, his expression a mask of indifference as he watched his master stare at the space you had once occupied.  "But the preparations--"
"SHUT UP!"

xD
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ImZeFemPrussia Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Student Writer
Oh my XD
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dragoneaster12 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2016
XD llllloooollllll xD hehehehe
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CraftyViolinist Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
... I have no words at the moment.... All I can say is that you should keep writing things like this, for they are amazing. Good work!
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)!
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AlenaRikaKeytt Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
aww that's so freaking cute!!! I love it!!! Scrapped Heart Emoji Animation sm Adorable 1 
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)!
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LittleMissMayhem123 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ciel, You see this vase? *Holds up a vase*
*Whispers* I'm gonna use it~
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CreamPuffe Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2015
WAIT, HE ALREADY PLANNED IT!?!?
WITHOUT ME!?
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sfais786 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Student Artist
i love it sooo much this is so KAWAII!!! Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] Ciel - 1 Ciel-Blushingplz la-chess: la-white-queen Ciel Phantomhive (Serious Look) [V1] Drama Queen 
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)!  I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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SamanthaTorres12348 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015
I love this. Amazing writing
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :)!
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BeYourself01452 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015
Isuzu Faint Icon Fainting Toy Freddy Chat Icon  I'm his queeeeeennnnn!!!!Foxy's Booty Dance (Chat Icon) 
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JadeL666 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes foxy XD
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BeYourself01452 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2016
X'D 
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Indeed :)
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