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(Death The Kid x Reader)

You ran through the hall, laughing wildly with tears streaming out of your eyes.  Your classmates ignored you.  This wasn’t unusual in the least.  You waved as you passed by Maka and Soul.
“Cool hair,” Soul commented.
You winked.  “Thanks but apparently Kid doesn’t think so!”
          You ducked into the janitor’s closet and listened as someone came rushing by.  You had to cover your mouth with your hand to stifle your giggling.  After you were sure he was gone, you took a moment to fix your hair.  Long on one side, short on the other.  You had wanted to do it for a while but had been waiting for just the right moment so that it would freak out your symmetry obsessed bestie at a time when he wasn’t expecting you to pull one of your little stunts.  And boy had it worked!
         After a few minutes of hiding in the closet, you grew bored and decided to go to class.   You knew you’d be late, but you didn’t care.  Professor Stein had probably canceled anyways.
        When you entered the classroom, you saw that, as suspected, class had been canceled.  As you approached your usual seat you noticed that Kid was pointedly ignoring you.  He sat with his elbow on his desk and his head in his hand as he scribbled on a page in his notebook.  You sat beside him and smiled warmly.  Patty and Liz exchanged a comical grin.
“I like your hair, ______!”  Patty exclaimed cheerfully.
“Me too,” Liz said.  “It suits you.”
“Thanks,” you blushed slightly and poked Kid in the shoulder.  His eyebrow twitched and he continued drawing scribbles in his notebook.  You sighed.  “Come on, Kid!  It isn’t THAT terrible is it?”
There was no reply.  You glanced at Patty who shrugged then at Liz who tried to give you a reassuring smile.  Your heart sunk a little.  He usually just yelled at you for a while then you were okay…he never just ignored you.  For the rest of the class you just sat there in silence.

         When the bell rang, you left immediately.  Students rushed by you, eager to go home for the day.  You dropped by your locked on the way out, however.  You had to put some books away.  You were about to slam it shut when the sound of familiar voices caught your attention.  You glanced around the corner.
“Why did you treat ______ that way?”  Liz asked.  Kid leaned against the wall, his expression still a bit agitated.
“Because…why does she always have to mess with me like that?”  Kid snapped.  “Sometimes I wonder if she just likes torturing me…”  Patty giggled, causing Kid’s annoyance to increase.  “What’s so funny?!”
“She likes the attention!  It’s obvious that ______ is totally in love with you, Kid!”  She said with a goofy smile.
Kid blinked a few times, his face burning bright red.  You pressed your back against the lockers and wished that you could just disappear.  How embarrassing!
“And Patty and I both know exactly how you feel about her,” Liz stated firmly.  There was a slight pause.  “Why don’t you just confess to her already?”
You tried to close you locker as silently as possible and backed away on your tiptoes.  Too bad you didn’t notice the large trashcan located five steps behind you…
                                                                                         CRASH!
Kid, Patty, and Liz all snapped their heads in your direction.  You blushed and tried to pull your foot out of the half-full trashcan.  Kid blinked a few times.
“H-Hey, guys!”  You said.  You flailed your leg around and pulled on the trashcan but it was no use.  The thing just would not come off!  An anime sweat-drop appeared on your forehead.  Eventually you just gave up.  “What’s up?”
Liz and Patty winked at each other and pushed Kid forwards.  He turned to speak to them, but they were already half way down the hall giggling.  You laughed nervously.
“Sooooooo…nice weather we’re having lately!”  You said.  ‘Okay…that was stupid!’  You thought.  ‘I should say something nice!’  “You’re looking extra symmetrical today!”
Kid cleared his throat and approached you.  He knelt and pulled your foot out of the trashcan with one quick jerk, causing you to stumble backwards.  You closed your eyes, expecting the hard impact of the floor to hit your behind at any second, but instead you felt someone pull you forwards.  When you opened your eyes they were immediately met by a pair of amber ones that watched your expression carefully, gauging your reaction.  You were both blushing furiously.  And you couldn’t tell if it was your heart or his that you could hear drumming so loudly.  Possibly both.  After a moment, both of you pushed away and crossed your arms.  You looked off in different directions, too embarrassed to face each other.
“I can’t do this…”  Kid sighed.  He started to walk off.  “See you at school tomorrow, _-”
Before he could finish, you grabbed his hand and pulled him back towards you.  Without hesitation, you pressed your lips against his in an attempt to finally show him your true feelings.  Apparently it worked.  He wrapped his arms around your waist and pulled you closer in an attempt to prolong the experience.  After a moment the two of you parted and you smiled awkwardly.
“Sorry,” you said.  “I’m not all that great at love confessions…”
“On the contrary,” Kid laughed.  “I think I got the message loud and clear.”
You smiled as Kid took your hand in his and caressed the side of your hand with his thumb.  He cleared his throat.
“Um…_____?”
“Yes?”
“Love you…but your hair is very asymmetrical…can you fix it please?”
You sighed.  A vein popped up on your forehead.  “Yes, Dear…”

THE END~
My first Death The Kid x Reader! Whoo! I love Soul Eater and Kid n_n! He is so hilarious. I just had to give this reader insert a try! I hope you all enjoy it and I really look forwards to reading your comments :D!
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youwho30 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
'Love you...but you hair is very asymmetrical...can you fix it?'

Really XD
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stormblitz21 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD my hair in the real world is short on the right side and long on the left. i've been looking for a reader insert that did this
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FireFall73 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
Wait so was I basically wearing a mullet? Lol
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0FinoFino0 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2015  New Deviant
Whoa! Very good :D
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Falling-To-Heaven Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  New Deviant
www.quotev.com/story/6671617/A…

I hope you know that I loved and my comments are not intended to hurt your feelings they are meant to encourage you to improve your writing skills because you are really talented, and some of the comments are to make the reader laugh :) please tell me if you don't want it up anymore and I will take it down if you like
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Edited Aug 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!

Constructive criticism does not offend me, but I must tell you that the fact you took my story, re-posted it, and broke down every little thing (even things that were on purpose and meant to sound the way they did) was very hurtful.  It is written as a comedy, and in an anime fashion meaning not everything is meant to be taken literal.  Like the tears at the beginning, it's supposed to be like a cartoon where the reader is laughing and a freakish amount of water is pouring from her eyes.  The canceled class thing, they just had nothing to do so they were chilling in there for a while until the next class.  There were some typos, but that's just because I didn't have time to error check, or I missed them.

If you had said, "Hey, you might wanna check for typos, and you have a few fragments you might want to change!"  I would have had no problem.  This is an older story, so I'm sure there are quite a few errors.  But tearing apart a story that was just written as a comedy to amuse people and make them laugh was a bit much.  Not everything is supposed to make sense.  It's not supposed to be perfect.  It was just intended to make people smile.  I didn't ask you for a full critique.  I, too, am a critic.  Writing is my major.  A lot of the things I post on this site are just for stupid fun.

I thank you for reading my stories, and I invite you to read more of them, but the fact you would point out every little flaw and post it online for other people to see is very embarrassing.  Especially considering this is an older story.  You should have just sent me a note and spoken to me privately.
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Falling-To-Heaven Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  New Deviant
you are completely right and I am very sorry If would like I will take down the story, I understand where you are coming from. For your concern with me re-posting your writing, I want you to know that I do give you the author full credit by putting your name, the date, and time you posted it as well as giving the reader the link to the original.

from now on I will start asking the author for permission to critique they're writing, to avoid any hurt feelings

I also want you to know that all the writing I do is 100% in no way meant to be hurtful or to embarrass the author, so again I am truly sorry for the hurt feelings my actions caused. just say the word and I will delete and send out an public apology.
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I would like for you to take it down, please.  And even though you gave me credit, re-posting without asking especially to publicly criticize someone's work is just as bad as stealing it.

There is a big difference in my professional writing and stories that I do just for fun.  A lot of it is intentionally stupid, and is just written for comedic purposes.  I'm an active critic.  I've helped lots of writers develop their writing style, and I did it in a way that boosted their confidence.  If you want to be a critic, you should work with the person and make them feel good about themselves :).  If they ask you to critique one of their works, tell them the good with the bad, and don't be sarcastic.  Sarcasm may be funny to other people, but to the writer it just sounds very rude.  Like, some of the things you said you put to amuse the reader really hurt my feelings because they were making fun of the story.  It's really hard for me to believe you enjoyed it at all when all you did was break down every little aspect and criticize things that weren't even supposed to be serious.  This is an older story. 

There were some typos, and as far as plot holes, there really was no plot.  It was just supposed to make the reader laugh.  Not all of my stories are as random, but many of my fan fictions aren't meant to be taken seriously.

Now, if you'd like to critique my book when it comes out, that's a different story :).
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Falling-To-Heaven Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015  New Deviant
Okay, I will take down the story
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AnonymousKittens Featured By Owner Edited Jul 3, 2015  New Deviant
I watched the whole series and almost threw my xbox controller agaonst the wall cause I thought Black Star, Lord Death, Kid, and Soul were dead xD I almost fainted when Soul and Kid spoke. I luv em too. Great story btw!
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Jazellia Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
I cried oceans during the final battle with the kishin. And I don't cry. EVER!!!! Only other time I cried was during a lot of Attack on titan.
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aphftwb-tches Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015
SO CUTE!!!!!!!! :iconitssofluffyplz:
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animekage17 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  New Deviant
This was your first Death the Kid x Reader? Wow . . . that's really good. . . . ^///^ Kawaii!
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)!
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Hyenagal-tunefreak Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
that was adorable!
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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Hyenagal-tunefreak Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
yas:D (Big Grin) 
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kitsune-cross Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Professional General Artist
Yes dear...
What are we somehow married now!?
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Bloodstarthecat34 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015
MAGIC!Imagination 
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kitsune-cross Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Professional General Artist
Yesh.
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kitsune-cross Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  Professional General Artist
England says: Santo Rita Mita Meada Ringo Jonah Tito Marlon Jack La Toya Janet Michael Dumbledora The Explorer Santo Rita Mita Meada Ringo Jonah Tito Marlon Jack La Toya Janet Michael Dumbledora The Explorer I've summoned you from the depths of hell SHOW YOURSELF! *Russia's head appear in the floor*
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Bloodstarthecat34 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
....LET'S PLAY WHACK-A-MOLE! Maxwell's Silver Hammer Tard Hammer :bonk: remake Ultimate Rage 
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kitsune-cross Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Professional General Artist
*backs away akwardly behind wall......comes back with john Egbert pogo-hammer!*
YEEEEEEAAAHH!
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Bloodstarthecat34 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
YES!
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TheAwsomeAsianGirl Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
The name of my hair cut actually has the word asymmetrical in it lol
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
That is amazing LOL
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CielXLizzy4Life212 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015  Student Writer
How do you make a fanfic? Also good job!
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!  And are you asking how to post one on this website or how to actually write one?  Because if you need help actually writing one, I would be happy to help :).  Just send me a note, please, and I'll give you some pointers.
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a-sound-heart Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry,” you said.  “I’m not all that great at love confessions…”
“On the contrary,” Kid laughed.  “I think I got the message loud and clear.”


This part made me laugh until I cried a little bit....

I ❤ ur writing thank you!
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!  I am so glad you enjoyed it!
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015  Student General Artist
I don't watch Soul Eater! But this was amazing!! :)
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015  Student General Artist
Welcome!
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AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I would also start mismatching socks just to annoy him XD
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too xD.
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AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
YYYAS
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UnaNocheLoca Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Student
I absolutley love it! :heart: :la:
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)!
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devils-daughter13 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
lol  that ending thou great story!
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :)!
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devils-daughter13 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015
you welcome :) (Smile) !:happybounce: 
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Lol Laughing  Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1]  Hatsune Miku-04 (Laughs)  Dignity Laugh  Bitten poptart LOL  Laugh  Laughing Luhan  Mio (Laughing) [V2]  Exo : Kai Laughing  Kano Shuuya (Secretly Laughing) [V8]  Tsumugi Kotobuki (Laughs) [V1]  Hetalia Prussia (Laugh)  Laughing Dragon  Shion laugh (higurashi)  HaHaHaHaHaHaHa ' 
I love it
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AnimeGeekKatie Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I seez you Romano 0.0 can I pull your curl!?
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D!
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RaLLiCrossoverH2 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
:)
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akiralikestodraw Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Love the ending
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)!
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akiralikestodraw Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:D
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CR33PY-C00KIES Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
FTFTFTFTF

LOOK AT THIS WONDERFUL THINGGGGGG
I LOVE IT! :D
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AnimeArtistRen Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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